You’re welcome, Ariel! Looks better now.
Now I Just recommend modelling and addition some rocks to complete the scene composition. :)
Hugs!
Ariel
Thanks very very much, Joao. I’ll try to make this changes.
João Paulo B. Ribeiro
Very nice guy! But I have some observations to do. I think you may improve this scene with a little retouches. First I’ve been noticing that this scene have a low fog density because I’m not feeling the atmosphere, the fog. Try make this detail according to real reference images of Mars. Another detail I’ve been noticing: this scene don’t have a good sense of perspective. I don’t know the cause of this but try to look to this three characters in this scene and the soil they’re stepping. Can you feeling a small “bug”? Where is the sense of perspective? Another detail to improve the general composition: I think you have to modelling some rocks (some big, others small) and add to the soil. Try follow this tips and post one more render. Hugs!
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Wow! Its great story here! Really nice!
You’re welcome, Ariel! Looks better now.
Now I Just recommend modelling and addition some rocks to complete the scene composition. :)
Hugs!
Thanks very very much, Joao. I’ll try to make this changes.
Very nice guy! But I have some observations to do. I think you may improve this scene with a little retouches. First I’ve been noticing that this scene have a low fog density because I’m not feeling the atmosphere, the fog. Try make this detail according to real reference images of Mars. Another detail I’ve been noticing: this scene don’t have a good sense of perspective. I don’t know the cause of this but try to look to this three characters in this scene and the soil they’re stepping. Can you feeling a small “bug”? Where is the sense of perspective? Another detail to improve the general composition: I think you have to modelling some rocks (some big, others small) and add to the soil. Try follow this tips and post one more render. Hugs!